So, how has your RPing experience been with Ishimaru so far - good, bad, aggressively mediocre? Here's where you can tell me! I'm always striving to improve, so feel free to crit as much as you like!
Things to possibly offer crit on:
+ Character Voice: Is his dialogue appropriate for his character, and does it sound like something he would conceivably say? Am I off in terms of slang usage or character-specific terms? Have I been calling your character by the wrong thing entirely (using a name instead of a title or the other way around, what are honorifics we just don't know, etc)? Is he being too aggressive? Not aggressive enough? Is he too vague? Or is he hitting your character over the head with all the subtlety of an anvil tied to an oncoming train at a time when that would not be appropriate?
NOTE REGARDING HONORIFICS: Ishimaru, in canon, does do something somewhat unusual with the honorifics he uses, that being that literally everyone in his peer group and younger is called "[surname]-kun." He will do this regardless of the gender of your character! So this is not me being completely clueless, I promise, it's an IC quirk of his.
+ Character Actions: Are the physical actions I'm describing logical and...well, physically possible? Are the situations that I'm utilizing in posts reasonably in-character? Is he treating your character in ways that are consistent with their CR, or has he been acting strangely toward them for seemingly no reason?
+ Tag Content: Am I giving you enough to respond to? Am I giving too much by overloading with dialogue or descriptions? Am I being too vague about the direction of a thread and causing it to meander around aimlessly, or does it feel like I'm going the other way entirely and trying to direct or force our CR?
+ Other Tagging Problems: Do I frequently miss the point or make stupid mistakes while tagging? Has there been awful grammar, unclear phrasing, things in action brackets that cause a tremendous WHAT THE HELL response, or the like?
...or it's entirely possible that you just really liked that last thread we did and want to tell me. That's perfectly cool as well!
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Things to possibly offer crit on:
+ Character Voice: Is his dialogue appropriate for his character, and does it sound like something he would conceivably say? Am I off in terms of slang usage or character-specific terms? Have I been calling your character by the wrong thing entirely (using a name instead of a title or the other way around, what are honorifics we just don't know, etc)? Is he being too aggressive? Not aggressive enough? Is he too vague? Or is he hitting your character over the head with all the subtlety of an anvil tied to an oncoming train at a time when that would not be appropriate?
NOTE REGARDING HONORIFICS: Ishimaru, in canon, does do something somewhat unusual with the honorifics he uses, that being that literally everyone in his peer group and younger is called "[surname]-kun." He will do this regardless of the gender of your character! So this is not me being completely clueless, I promise, it's an IC quirk of his.
+ Character Actions: Are the physical actions I'm describing logical and...well, physically possible? Are the situations that I'm utilizing in posts reasonably in-character? Is he treating your character in ways that are consistent with their CR, or has he been acting strangely toward them for seemingly no reason?
+ Tag Content: Am I giving you enough to respond to? Am I giving too much by overloading with dialogue or descriptions? Am I being too vague about the direction of a thread and causing it to meander around aimlessly, or does it feel like I'm going the other way entirely and trying to direct or force our CR?
+ Other Tagging Problems: Do I frequently miss the point or make stupid mistakes while tagging? Has there been awful grammar, unclear phrasing, things in action brackets that cause a tremendous WHAT THE HELL response, or the like?
...or it's entirely possible that you just really liked that last thread we did and want to tell me. That's perfectly cool as well!
Comments are screened; anon commenting is on, IP logging is off.
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